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Four (or more) poems for a budget of winners and losers

‘And remember to give them hope.’

Looking back, the words seem to echo.  On this day a year ago, 19 December 2023, Rachel Reeves was speaking from the pulpit at the memorial service of Alastair Darling in an overflowing St Mary’s Cathedral, the Episcopal one at Edinburgh’s West End.

Then shadow chancellor, she paid tribute to the much-respected man she described as her mentor, most memorably adding a moving description of her recent visits to Edinburgh. Despite his advancing cancer, Alastair Darling was following Jeremy Hunt’s budget statement due on 22 November with keen interest (Alastair Darling died surrounded by family on 30 November).  

When Rachel Reeves asked him how she should respond to Hunt’s statement, she told us, the former chancellor replied: 

Make sure the sums add up

Don’t get caught in a political trap

And remember to give them hope

What hope? With so many political traps set, so much ill-willing media, and such a confusion of sums to add up, hope will be squeezed into a tight space between fiscal fine tuning, unintended consequences and real-life experience of ‘ordinary people’. There will be much talk of winners and losers and very little contact between those who strike lucky and unlucky.

Who and where are life’s winners and losers? North, South, East, West, there’s precious little poetry in the words and numbers of budgets, but pausing for breath on edge of Winter Solstice darkness, here’s a selection of poems drawing on a wealth of experience, the kind of human insight that could enhance political debate – and open a path to hope.

1. Who wins the race?

Race is a funny word

It implies someone will win. 

American Arithmetic: Natalie Diaz.

Counting was the theme of this year’s National Poetry Day. But what does counting mean for the millions of people who are numbers not names, the ones who don’t really count?

Natalie Diaz’s American Arithmetic is an arresting protest laying bare the official data that renders thousands of Native Americans invisible, the state-sanctioned abuse concealed in statistics. In prosaic terms, the poet tells us Native Americans make up less than one per cent of the American population, yet 1.9% of all police killings, ‘the highest per capita of any race’.

Nathalie Diaz, Pulitzer prize winning poet, associate professor, former professional basketball player and Mojave American activist, was born and grew up in the Fort Mojave Indian Village in Needles, California.  That’s where she learned to count.

American Arithmetic, from the Colonial Love Song collection, is set in the US but echoes across the world. Powerful, poignant and sometimes painfully playful, it prods meaningless terms into life; the racism hidden in that ‘funny word’ race. It implies someone will win. ‘Who wins the race that is not a race?’  

2. An unexpected better way

I’m puzzled by my loss of memory

The sudden cull of my vocabulary

Forgotten: David Perman

Here is unexpected hope.  David Perman’s Collected and New Poems includes three poems confronting his stroke. Head on. Exploring a strange new landscape without maps, groping for names in his garden of now anonymous roses, meeting loved-ones without labels on the doorstep – trying to make sense of a world that is both familiar and foreign, rediscovery is part of the recovery, and it is recorded movingly in poetry of courageous insight.

A cull of vocabulary might seem particularly cruel to someone who made a living from language. In 20 years of working for BBC World Service, David Perman managed radio broadcasts in English, Arabic and Greek. He was A Square Peg in Bush House, In retirement he publishes and writes poetry. Known for his quick-witted repartee, ‘shooting from the lip’, after his stroke he found a blockage slowing the flow – and yet, against expectation, decides it’s much better that way.  

Not just for me but for a wider world perhaps

How second thoughts might deepen debate

Make politics more palatable,

The listening mode instead of ‘point of order’

Might make the markets pause and be

more mature, might restrain the guns

while communications prospered –

no more shooting from the hip, so to speak.

Repartee: David Perman

our beautiful wind turbine against the setting sun, Pond Cottage photo Fay Young

3. Fear not. The Future is not F*cked

yiv aywiz bin free, ma quine. it’s jist

humankind is a god factory.

yer aye churnin oot deities,

Gloria in Exelsisoleum: Mae Diansangu

 ‘How do we let go of the world of oil and all it represents? Friends of the Earth Scotland put the question politicians find safer to dodge (does it feature in budget or election debates?) to poets in The Future is not F*cked a brilliantly conceived spoken word night in Aberdeen, the city where ‘some people have three cars’  

That night produced a film and a book.

Watch the film (HERE) download the book (HERE). If only more activism was so carefully constructed: connecting rather than dividing.   The Future is not F*cked began with FoE’s Just Transition Organiser for the North East, Scott Herrett, who wanted to use art to kindle hope of a new future in a city where oil binds so many lives together.

The black stuff still flows (you will have noticed). But screenings in Aberdeen, Glasgow and Edinburgh have stirred animated discussion inspired by stories of people whose lives depend on oil.  Or do they?    ‘An fa telt ye, ye wis powerless? asks Mae Diansangu in her rousing Gloria in Excelsisoleum as the ‘crude god’ becomes a ‘finite god’.

The poetry in Doric, Scots and English is powerful and deeply personal. Spoken from experience.

Crude weeps into the drip-tray of my nightmares

sour gas pollutes my palate, guilt saturates

everything we knew because – of course, we knew.

NRRD: John Bolland

The Future is not F*cked is available for community screening.

4. We don’t have to be losers

See all the shit-stained statues 

With all their ancient values 

Those concrete ghosts 

that still decide 

Be the Hammer: Aidan Moffat

‘We’ll still be here.’ There’s a promise, and threat in Be the Hammer, the last track on the first album by Andrew Wasylyck and Tommy Perman.  Ash Grey and the Gull Glides Home is an experimental collaboration of soaring new music at times uplifting and unsettling, joyous and searching. Aidan Moffat’s sonorous song poem at the end adds a lingering, ambiguous message.

Towards the end of a year when democracy shudders in fright, one image in particular sticks in my mind: those shit-stained statues and the ancient values that still decide. The concrete ghosts that shape the laws that support the status quo, keeping us all in our rightful place.  

Who are we? Where do we stand? Winners, losers? Accepting or resisting? Ready to rebuild?  

From Ash Grey and the Gull Glides Home

Be the hammer. Whatever the message, there’s no room for apathy. Moffat’s deep intoning (like a priest, I think, without a catechism) is strangely comforting in its strong insistence. ‘Just be sure that you’re still feeling’.  Here we all are, then. And (politicians take note) ‘Come tomorrow we’ll still be here’.    

First published on Sceptical Scot   

Mother Country, get it right: Benjamin Zephaniah

It’s very touching to see so many new views of this old post. It’s a tribute to the great humanity of Benjamin Zephaniah who died on Thursday 7 December 2023. His loss is mourned but his poetry lives on.

As first published on Sceptical Scot in 2016.

[In 2016, on 50th anniversary of Race Relations Act] Benjamin Zephaniah looked back at the evolution of racism in Britain. In poetry and prose he presents evidence that is disturbingly topical in a week of continuing upheaval in the UK.

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Sunset song for the winter solstice

The winter sun just hangs over the ridge of the Coolags. Its setting will seal the shortest day of the year, the winter solstice. At this season the sun is a pale wick between two gulfs of darkness.

So wrote George Mackay Brown, the observant eye of the great Orkney poet seeking out the touch of magic conjured up by the Neolithic architects who created Maeshowe with hard-hewn rock and a knowing eye on the heavens. Continue reading

For future generations: buried poetry

Remember that ancient Chinese saying –

And may you live in interesting times?

It sounds like benediction, blessing,

but no, it’s contrary, not what it seems.

Alan Spence Interesting Times: 2021

Alan Spence the fifth Makar of Edinburgh has written a poem to be buried in the ground. A time capsule poem for future generations. It was his last official commission at the end of his four years as poet laureate for the capital city (the original three year term was extended by a year thanks to Covid).

With the Makar’s blessing, I had started to post this wryly gentle poem before Putin invaded Ukraine. A time capsule poem reflecting on our shared experience of the last two years seemed to belong in what was likely to be the last scheduled publication of Sceptical Scot [and it came to pass, see Sceptical shuts up Shop statement – not buried but safely secured in the archive of the National Library of Scotland]. With obscene cruelty the President of Russia had added his own crude lines to the Chinese curse.

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The sound of loosening ice

Pause for thought. I’m not sure why the poetry of Gael Turnbull moves me so much. Perhaps because he was a hands-on doctor as well as a poet – and I often think of my GP brother working at the sharp end of the pandemic, meeting real people in real life, taking the occasional breather to make a black joke.

“I’ll be mighty pissed off if I die in my last year at work,” he texted last March as Covid put paid to his plans for earlyish retirement and the local health authority struggled to meet demand for personal protective equipment. Nevertheless, I was proud to discover, he insists on seeing his patients in person, distrusting the evidence presented on screens: “Doctors need to prod patients.”

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Being Ninety

Being ninety we are

the generation whose fathers fought

in the First World War

Old age is a bit of a mystery.  How did we get here?  How much further are we going?

I wrote this for Sceptical Scot poetry section, fired by a new poem by an old friend and prose by John Harris which hit a spot. A tender spot. In a looking glass world, the over-70s face indefinite lockdown while Covid-19 rampages through scandalously unprotected care homes.

I’m not ninety, not yet anyway though I have lived in hope that I might have inherited some of the genes of my Great Aunty Ada who survived Spanish flu, served as a nurse in the Spanish Civil War, dug her new garden as a ninety-year-old and died at the age of 106 just before the turn of the 21st Century.

Would she have survived Covid-19? I don’t know. But I know she did not really consider herself old until she was nearing her 100th birthday. So I also delight in the robust letter of Hella Pick to the Guardian in protest at ‘an insult against a massive group of able-bodied, hard-working people who are making important contributions to society.’ She is 91.

And look to France where plans for Monday’s (11 May) cautious opening up initially excluded the over-70s but government backed-off after a deafening uproar from the ‘soixantehuitards’. Ah, 1968 – the year of revolutions. Lets not give in. We will need plenty adventurous rebels of all ages if we are to discover the means to ‘build back better’. Now, please read on and (if you haven’t already done so) take a trip to Sceptical Scot to explore further.

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Poetry and song for a pandemic

Trees are cages for them, water holds its breath

Norman Maccaig: stars and planets

Where to look? From the back door, red lights twinkle on cranes neck-stretched above the chastened construction site of Edinburgh’s St James ‘retailopolis’. Builders banned. Animation suspended.  Coronavirus stills and silences city life as we have known it. 

I look up to the night sky. As a child I found that starry darkness a dizzying immensity, struggling with the eight times table my mind was never going to fathom infinity. Still can’t. No, I do know my times tables, but I can still go dizzy with the endlessly intoxicating dazzle of starlight.

That helps on a day when news is far from uplifting. One of our very best baby boomers, Edinburgh Festival (born, like me, in 1947), is cancelled until next year. So, necessarily confined to our own Covid cage, I find comfort in the liberating poetry and music I chose for Sceptical Scot last week. I hope you might too.   

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West Highland trainlines of poetry

Another day, another chaotic train journey from Edinburgh to Glasgow. Not much poetry on the tracks right now but one fine day I think I will board the West Highland Line with a musician and film-maker to capture the sight and sound of the best rail journey in the world.

This train is for Mallaig. The rolling stock has seen better days but for those lucky enough to be heading north there’s five and a half hours of magic along the line.

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Balanced in between Ireland and Britain

On a Wednesday morning early I took the road to Derry

Along Glenshane and Foreglen and the cold woods of Hillhead

Seamus Heaney: The Road to Derry

It’s almost always personal. My latest poetry blogpost for Sceptical Scot provides a selection of five poems for the General Election. I wanted to balance the persistent drumbeat of divisive politics with different voices.  I kept more intimate feelings to myself.

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